Great, but something's missing.
It had a very tight sound, but...It sounds so thin. And as far as this goes musically, creative composition. Not boring at all. Try to add a rhytm guitar in the back playing som chords, and leave a little more groove? The BD was 100% synchronized all the way with the guitars, it sounds like.
But that is all based on opinion. Perhaps others might consider this perfect.
But anyway, i suggest you put on a bass, and that you increase the sound of the cymbals.
Thanks for the critisism dude. This is a somewhat rough work in progress, so keep an eye out for the full version comming soon! :)
What needs to be said, has been said. There is nothing more about this song that can be said in words, this is bigger than reality.
Umm thanks! :D
So proffessionally done, and with such enthusiasm. Anyone can make some chords with different instruments, you made it alive. The piano that went in the intro was repeated perfectly, with just a sence of Deja Vu, changing the later measures of the original piano-piece. This song is absolutely a piece of art.
I'm very honored to receive your review! Thank you!
Better than "Crystal Path", but has the same negatives...It's quite repetive. I hate it how the same snare sound repeats itself throughout the song, but that quickly becomes good when a second snare with a darker pitch enters the image. It is quite magic, and gives a spiritual feeling. It would be perfect for use in a cave of some sort. Perhaps then, having the snare echoed would be something?
It would also be something if you adjusted the volume of the snare a little. I found it quite loud, but perhaps that was intentional..? Also, if the intro was without any drumming of some sort...Let's say 8 measures without any snares.
Then, 4 measures with a bass guitar. After that, i suggest you could the intensity slowly increasing. After 8 measures of progression, i suggest a sort of climax (Not that this is the kind of music) where you have a reverbed crash-cymbal, and that snare with a darker pitch following the first...
This could actually become a classic, and you do not get the fame you deserve.
This is something that could've been in several major titles, but it could never become a classic. This song is magic in many ways, but is also a little boring. Perhaps if the song would be the background of a fantastic, yet calm scene, it would be perfect. But the negatives of this song is basically the two tones that go on and on. Perhaps that would be the suitable formula for the mentioned scene...
The small crystal-tones in the background is making it up. Perhaps you could use some different drum-patterns, which sounds like the same loop going on and on?
As i said, all the negatives i have mentioned may be intentional based on taste, my taste doesn't go in your favour, it seems.
But this is work of talent, nonetheless.
thx for the review, yea its my second music ever created so I appreciate your advice
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